Friday Fictioneers – June 28, 2013

Thank you Rochelle Wissoff-Fields for hosting!


Write a one hundred word story that has a beginning, middle and end. (No one will be ostracised for going over or under the word count.)

Fleeting by Indira Mukherjee

Fleeting by Indira Mukherjee

No! Shit!

She’d missed the bus. Snoozing her alarm had been a mistake. Sighing, Shelley adjusted her back pack and set off down the road.

Her surroundings blurred as her mind drifted to prom and her date with Brad and the hotel room afterward. A thrill ran through her at the possibilities. She wanted Brad to be her first.

Her phone beeped showing a text from Beth, β€œWhere are you?” She wasn’t going to make it staying on Main Street. With only a moment’s hesitation, she cut across the corn field never seeing the hooded figure that followed.

20 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers – June 28, 2013

  1. Good story and I felt the same as most of others who left a comment. A question though – why are we all thinking that the hooded figure is bad? Is it a man or a woman, bet we all thought man, sadly reflects the world we all live in today.
    Well written, well done

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